What a fantastic treat to find another installment of this fic! I saw in the comments above that you feel the urge to write more stories in this ‘verse. Yay! I’m thrilled at the prospect of this continuing.
One of the things that I really like about this series, and it shows so clearly in this installment, is Justin’s surety and strength. Even when faced with the pain and confusion of being newly turned, his understanding of his bond with Brian and its eternal inevitability is so wonderfully portrayed.
I also appreciated the way that Brian’s guilt came across. It’s very true to character that he would blame himself, and I think you captured both the raw emotion of it along with the subtle complexities within Brian concerning his feelings for Justin.
I also really loved Debbie here. Her clear understanding of the situation and the actions that Brian needed to take had me cheering her on. Supportive, forceful, no bullshit Debbie at her best!
I’m glad you felt inspired to write more of this. I thoroughly enjoyed it! :)
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One of the things that I really like about this series, and it shows so clearly in this installment, is Justin’s surety and strength. Even when faced with the pain and confusion of being newly turned, his understanding of his bond with Brian and its eternal inevitability is so wonderfully portrayed.
I also appreciated the way that Brian’s guilt came across. It’s very true to character that he would blame himself, and I think you captured both the raw emotion of it along with the subtle complexities within Brian concerning his feelings for Justin.
I also really loved Debbie here. Her clear understanding of the situation and the actions that Brian needed to take had me cheering her on. Supportive, forceful, no bullshit Debbie at her best!
I’m glad you felt inspired to write more of this. I thoroughly enjoyed it! :)
~Ellen